Amazon:老外也开始看修真穿越的起点文了... [美国媒体]

辉月并不为当时舍命救下朋友的决定而后悔。但谁又能知道死亡对他来说并不是终点,而是通往充满恶魔怪兽和武功修炼的异世界的起点。美国网友:好吧,故事设定绝对五星,但文笔只有两星,综合一下给3星吧。但我相信作者只是需要一些锻炼,以后的作品会更好的。



Sacrificing his life to protect his best friend was a decision which Hui Yue did not regret, yet who could have known that death was not the final destination, but rather the beginning of a new adventure into a world filled with demonic beasts and martial arts cultivation.

辉月并不为当时舍命救下朋友的决定而后悔。但谁又能知道死亡对他来说并不是终点,而是通往充满恶魔怪兽和武功修炼的异世界的起点。

Hui Yue soon found that within this world, strength was what determined your future accomplishments and there was no space for the weak. 

辉月不久就发现力量是这个世界永恒的真理,强者生,弱者灭。

Embarking upon this new life, Hui Yue meets friends, experience betrayal, and starts his own journey of cultivation to overcome his limits and become strong.

重生后的辉月,结识新伙伴、经历背叛、并为了战胜自身的极限而开始他的修炼之旅。



作者的信:   

Hi, I'm Tinalynge
I am a hopeful person who aspire to start my career as an author with Blue Phoenix. Blue Phoenix is a novel which I have poured very my heart and soul into creating.

我满怀希望的将蓝凤凰系列作为我作家生涯的起点。蓝凤凰是令我非常骄傲的作品,我为之倾注了大量心血。

My writing is inspired by popular genres of Chinese webnovels. These stories usually takes place in a world unlike our own. A world filled with demonic beasts and cultivation of both body and soul. This is a world where a person's level of strength is what determines their future accomplishments.

我的作品是从很流行的中国网络小说那得到的灵感。这些故事一般发生在不同于我们自己的世界的异世界。那些异世界充斥着恶魔野兽和修炼身体与内力的武功。这是个个人武力决定其未来成就的世界。

I am still an aspiring author and I am aware that my writing still has several flaws which I am hoping to improve while writing more.

我还刚刚起步,作品难保不会有瑕疵,但我会在实践中慢慢完善。

Thank you to everyone who has supported me with buying my book, your purchase has greatly motivated me.

谢谢大家买书支持我,你们的支持让我深受鼓励。

Kind regards
Tinalynge

感谢!


5.0 out of 5 stars Story is excellent, April 26, 2016
By Steve-o LoBue
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This review is from: Riluo City (Blue Phoenix Book 1) (Kindle Edition)
I would like to start by saying Yes, there are grammar issues. This young woman is a brand new author, with this being, as I understand it, her first work. The story itself, the whole point of this work, is beyond excellent. The progression of the main character and side characters, the system used for power, all of it is very well executed, not to mention the length of the book. It is a genuinely large book that took me more than one day to complete, and still only $5. I am not familiar with chinese mythology and culture, so I don't know how much this work draws from said culture, but it was new for me. I happily read this, my wife will be reading this soon, and I recommend all my fellow readers to give it a shot as well. Excited to read book 2 soon, whether it has been to an editor or not.
Ma'am, great job.

我先得承认,文笔确实有问题。毕竟这个女孩是一个新生作家,这本书也是他的第一本书。故事本身非常棒。主角和配角的发展、实力系统的设定,这一切都很好,更不要说这本小说的篇幅之长了。这本书差不多花了我一两天的时间才看完,却只卖5美元。我对于中国神话和文化不太了解,所以我也不太清楚小说中有多少是源于中国文化,但对我来说很新颖。我很高兴悦读了这本书,我太太之后也会阅读,同时我还推荐我的读者朋友也尝试看看。期待本书的第二版。
写得真不错。

4.0 out of 5 starsbuy
ByAmazon Customeron July 10, 2016
Format: Kindle Edition|Verified Purchase
The author definitely needs a good editor, her writing is a "raw", but if you don't mind the flaes in editing and "style" it's a very good book, original and refreshing.
Bottom line, i bought the next installment and i recommend to buy- enjoy

作者确实需要一个好的编辑来把把关,她的文笔有点粗糙。但如果你不介意这些的话,这是本很棒的书,既有原创感又有新颖感。
话说,我还买了下一版,我推荐你们也买买看。

5.0 out of 5 starsBook 1 is great! Not your average xianxia tale of power up ...
ByNCon March 8, 2016
Format: Kindle Edition
Book 1 is great!
Not your average xianxia tale of power up power up power up. This tale has a lot of American fantasy elements entwined, especially with the focus on friends vs factions vs family. A great tale that starts off slowly in a wonderful detailed world and by the end you cannot help but to rush, rush, rush to know what happens next.
  
第一版不错,不是通常的那种升级式仙侠..
这本小说里还有不少美国文化的印记,特别是在处理家庭/朋友/派系斗争上。故事一开始很平缓,一系列精彩的世界渐渐展开,到最后你就迫不及待的想看后面的情节。

5.0 out of 5 starsGreat story
ByHigginsAon July 2, 2016
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This is a great book. Filled with lots of action scenes. Great friends that find themselves caught up in the politics of their fathers. The Chinese mythology and the creatures are fully developed. Some grammar and spelling issues but overall a highly riveting tail of friendship. I highly recommend this book.

这本书超级棒。里面有很多战斗的情节。还有好朋友被卷入父辈的政治斗争之中的设定。整本书很好的反映了中国文化和创造性。文笔和语法上有写些问题,但整体上讲非常好,绝对推荐。

1.0 out of 5 starsAgainst The Gods
ByAmazon Customeron November 25, 2016
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This book is very familiar to a free online novel named Against The Gods.

这本书跟网上一本免费小说《逆天邪神》很像。

4.0 out of 5 starsFour Stars
ByLucas Siowon October 7, 2016
Format: Kindle Edition|Verified Purchase
Good for the genre, though it got repetitive quickly. Main character one dimensional.
  
故事题材不错,但故事进展有点快了,而且主角形象有点单薄。

3.0 out of 5 stars Hmm
ByKindle Customeron July 28, 2016
Format: Kindle Edition|Verified Purchase
So the idea behind it all is 5 stars. The writing and how the words flow together is only a 2. So I give it a 3 over all but I'm sure the author just needs more practice and will be writing their stories with eloquence soon.
  
好吧,故事设定绝对五星,但文笔只有两星,综合一下给3星吧。但我相信作者只是需要一些锻炼,以后的作品会更好的。

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